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I Was

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Fusing

our skin,

sagging between

wet folds.

Pulsing.


Our eyes lose,

grip loosens.

Tightening,

We're laying down.


We're down.


Squelching.


I was


Growing

inside and over

each other.

Our legs are one,

my mind is

so cold.

Cool

heads attached.


Together,

was that the goal?

Mouths caved

in.

Can't speak,

drooling.


I was


Moaning.


I was


I remember

my hair.

I remember

teeth.

I remember

my speech,

blurred lights, vision

borrowed now.


I was


Crying.


I was blonde.


I was many.


I was


Moving.


I was


Before you.


Only less.

Wet muscle.

Dry bones.


I was


Quiet


I was

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Posted Jan 23, 2026, 5:03 AM UTC

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