Winter

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Oh winter with your freezing icy heart

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Impaling every chest right from the start

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You are making this day just fall apart

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And I just can’t wait for you to depart

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Your 9 inch blanket made out of frost

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Makes my fingers and my toes feel lost

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They’re throbbing hard hurt bad I hate your cost

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My whole body is starting to exhaust

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I have cleared the sidewalk and the car

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I could really really use a bar

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But none of them are open how bizarre

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So I am drinking moonshine from a jar

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Why is it in the midst of a storm

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What you need is gone and you can’t get warm

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Posted Jan 26, 2026, 10:07 PM UTC

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