Feedback for my Short Film Script (27 Pages)

Logline : When Veer is unable to pay his loan back, bad decisions and chaos follow him as he tries to manage the money before his organs are put up for sale.

I had previously written 3-4 pages script, but this the biggest one ive done so far with 27 pages, I would love to get some feedback from people here and want to know where i can do better and improve myself too. No matter good or bad any form of criticism and suggestions are welcome, hope you enjoy the script.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q0cc1c15Hac5tgyeLWNzfJahMGhZjkaT/view?usp=sharing