New-ish author, would love some feedback on my stories.
- Hello everyone. Around June last year, I began submitting them to Literotica. I have noticed that, depending on the category, each story is received very differently, but the more stories I publish, I feel like I get less and less feedback for some of my stories. I try to write a variety of different stories so that there is something for everyone as well as to satisfy my varying inspirations. I know that no one is required to comment on a story, but when some of my stories have much lower ratings than others, I feel like it would be helpful to get some feedback as to what is missing. I've gotten some comments that are just plain critical over something ridiculous or suggesting I kill a character because he's cucking some other guy, and I ignore those. What I am looking for are any comments that actually provide constructive criticism that I can use to improve or just positive feedback in general. Here is the link to my profile. I would love to hear back on what anyone thinks of any of my stories. Thank you. My My author name is Jetfire99.
- https://www.literotica.com/authors/Jetfire99/works/stories
- This is the first chapter of The Four Sisters Currently there are six chapters with chapter three split into two parts. https://www.literotica.com/s/the-four-sisters-ch-01
- This is the first chapter of Bully Conquers My Girlfriend Currently there are four chapters plus a spin-off. https://www.literotica.com/s/bully-conquers-my-girlfriend-ch-01
- This is the first chapter of Next Door Soulmate. Currently there are two chapters https://www.literotica.com/s/next-door-soulmate-ch-01
- This is my story Sister's Sleepover. https://www.literotica.com/s/sisters-sleepover-ch-01-veronica
- This is my One-Shot The Pool Boy. https://www.literotica.com/s/the-pool-boy-11
Posted Jan 31, 2026, 1:28 PM UTC
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