Subject: Need some help with my Royal Road novel (Non-native English speaker)

Hey guys, I’ve finally posted my novel on Royal Road. I translated it myself from my native language to English, which was pretty tough! Because my English is still at a beginner level, I relied on translation tools to get the job done. Now, I’m worried if the story actually makes sense or if the writing feels inconsistent. Is there anyone willing to check it out and give me some tips? It’s 22 chapters long so far. Any advice would mean a lot!