What do yall think of my first ever poem? I also plan to speak it to my long distance partner, so dont attack my grammar and punctuation lol

Honey oh honey, you're so cute, like a bunny.

Pretty, funny and smart, a special place youve got in my heart.

Ill have you know, youre really hot, but thats not why I love you a lot

The most incredible person I've ever met, and in stone, that fact is set.

I love you and miss you so much all of the time, im bad with words but I've made this poem for you, rhyme.

We're gonna need so much money, for many things, but more so I can hold you, honey

If communication went down, my love, every week by your window, you’d find a dove

One day, on your finger be a ring, as to my world, its peace you bring

I hope you've liked this, and my love, living in this world with you, is bliss

I know where the pauses are but idk how to write that 😭

So, I hope that you all can FEEL where the pauses are if you were planning to talk about them