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Bonetlob

Not everything you write needs to be posted(Bollox Ramblings)

Feedback Please

MerPeople soak all the pretty water in the bath house

I rinse my hands with piss and alcohol wipes

Lead pill prescriptions for my light heart

I can't bear the thinness of these walls

You can always fashion a sword to a point with words of cruelty

How dare you think even in eve and that garden that feelty was ever a blessing

And contemplate her children

Dying on a cross

And I'm in this kitchen now

With the staff of this bath house

And they want me out

In place of a great lion with a serpents name

Who will eat all of your fish

Is he not a cat after all?

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Posted Feb 13, 2026, 1:02 AM UTC

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