Venus Rising

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Cosmos aligned, pinholed

  through a raven blanket,

  Jupiter broods,

  Mars burns.

Venus, drive my soul,

  my heart forever entwined.

Our conscious minds

  met on this plain,

our essence met in infinity,

  where space and time fell open.

We shall dance among

  the Milky Way,

in the arms of Cassiopeia,

  you, Andromeda,

  I, Perseus.

Let governments fall,

  cathedrals crumble.

Infinity will be our music,

  the stars our humbled choir.

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Posted Feb 14, 2026, 1:48 PM UTC

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