One month of tiktok, trying new stuff

I just open a Horror, true crime, creepypasta, weird tiktok channel one month ago and tbh it goes pretty well, but i'm still searching on what topic i should focus.

I'm trying to make an analog horror / dreamcore kinda serie and i just made a " teaser ".

It's my first time doing this but tell me what you feel and what should i improve before i release the full video !

( My tiktok is in french sorry ) There is the link of my new video 👨‍🏫 :

https://vm.tiktok.com/ZNRfuoNme/