Slugs In Love: A Sonnet (kind-of)

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As night descends through cedar trees,

Small creatures, yellow-spotted cows,

Drag boneless forms with gentle ease

And mark their paths along the boughs.

Across the rain-soaked, mossy ground

Their bodies trace two separate trails,

Their slimy love-song winding round,

The fir and vines and ferns and vales.

One, sensing dampness in the air,

Creeps from beneath a rotting log,

And finds the other waiting there,

His gleaming bride dressed up in fog.

Their tendrils softly intertwine,

Two slugs, in love, beneath a pine.

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Posted Feb 16, 2026, 5:07 AM UTC

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