[Pop/Rock] Why Are You Not Here by Zarathustra’s fire

YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLPok1h_eyI

Looking for feedback on:

- Hook/chorus impact (does it land?)

- Arrangement pacing (anything that drags or should hit sooner?)

- Mix clarity (any moments where vocals or key parts get buried?)

If you can, tell me what genre you’d tag it as + one change you’d make.