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manzca

Last Night

Feedback Please

The Music hits before I recognize it’s playing,

I don’t even know how I got here.

There is this rhythmic pressure

forcing me to move with the beat.

I look around and see her.

Who is she?

She’s holding me, dancing,

and that familiar feeling returns-

the control inside I’ve lost.

Looking at her,

I have never felt more.

This only works because it ends,

I will chase this feeling again,

Knowing it is not something

I can find for myself.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/EWsfPzGEim

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/zblg1B6JVD

Posted Feb 18, 2026, 2:32 AM UTC

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