Treading water

Feedback Please

Haven’t landed on a title that felt quite right. Would love suggestions

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Being someone’s only reason

Feels like trying to stay afloat

While being pulled under

Aren’t you asking too much of me?

No, this is what I signed up for

Betraying you would be betraying me

How could I drift away as you drown?

But how could I save you

If I’m drowning too?

And if I can’t keep my vows

Am I the villain in this story?

Or just another body

Swaying in the ocean?

I don’t know

How to be your lifeline

Watch as you unravel

Gasping for air

Salt on my face

Grieving as I unravel

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Posted Feb 21, 2026, 4:31 PM UTC

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