Falling Again

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With me, towards the end.

falling

Our little game over too soon.

always

Go again until we have nothing.

lost

We know it was but wouldn’t say it.

true

the dead ends.

Shattering

Here we go

again.

We’ll always say not this time.

never,

But what is for us.

left

Making the pieces with gold.

whole

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Posted Feb 21, 2026, 5:26 PM UTC

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