Literature: 'Our Sunshine' close analysis

wsg gang. Got my first 3/4 lit sac Monday next week, doing a close analysis on 'Our Sunshine' by Robert Drewe. Lowk struggling badly atm to figure out how to actually write one, and score decent marks. I've done a couple of practices, and my teacher said she'd score me between 13-15 marks for them, out of 20. I'm aiming for a 45 study score for the class, and would love to read some high mark examples from past students.

*I tried reading the example provided on the exam feedback for last year, but that shit makes no sense 😭😭, deadass may as well have been written in Chinese.