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Tons of drafts not yet posted, only one polished enough to be posted, entering the novella contest with it but looking for some feedback on it.

This is the prompt: "You discover the dragon everyone fears is in danger, and you are the only one who can save it from the knight sworn to slay it."

Don’t want to spam or do this simply for views, just looking for readers and thoughts, so I can send screenshots of it if that’s a concern. Link to the chapter is:

https://www.wattpad.com/1606834632?utm\_source=ios&utm\_medium=link&utm\_content=share\_reading&wp\_page=reading&wp\_uname=Heku-1117

Any of it is appreciated!