Brown Eyes

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I struggled to look her in the eyes…

they were big, brown and undeniably persuasive.

Even just once glance sends me into a deep, hypnotic

and unforgiving trance.

The shiny but promising glimpse in her beautiful eyes

sang sweet lullabies to my feigning soul.

I indulged heavily in this angelic song, as every tune

precariously danced through my vacant mind and out

my beating heart.

Her gaze is forever in-bedded in my daydreams.

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Posted Feb 23, 2026, 3:37 PM UTC

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