[Complete][3K][Historical Fiction]Short Story, Italian Front, WW1

I'd love to have some comments/feedback about style and plot before submitting for publication. It's set on the Italian front during WW1. This is a complete, proofread manuscript.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LDLSeLCP_F5wIWVzp4bJwltenKBbPunP3wMwg9rzJRY/edit?usp=sharing

I'm happy to return the favor and read other short stories!