Raw garage rock demo – “Fortune”

Hey folks,

I’m working on a very straightforward, no-frills garage rock project.

This is “Fortune”, a badly home‑recorded demo.

I’m looking for feedback on the structure, the overall impact, and the mood.

I’m not trying to make it “perfect” — I just want to know if it actually hits.

Any technical comment or instinctive impression is welcome.

Feel free to speak your mind.

https://open.spotify.com/track/5dJW8XRt3oLVIU0xbOH5XM?si=kiTAowjySIa3oFjNoK22ng