Wrote a poem in Urdu for the first time.

This is the poem I wrote in Urdu. I'd be happy to hear your thoughts on this.
I am Nepali, but I love poetry, so I am learning the most beautiful language in the world.

Chaand ki kya tareef karoon,
Aap to chaand se bhi khoobsurat ho.
Aapke liye jannat bhi chhod doon,
Kyunki aap hi mera noor ho.

Dil ki har dhadkan mein bas naam aapka ho,
Rab se bhi pehle zikr har baar aapka ho.
Har janam mein aap sirf meri ho, bas yahi dua hai,
Kaise samjhaun aapko ye ishq jo aapse hua hai.