List question - planning

Hi!

I am trying to plan out my army and after a few tests here is what I came to.

Does it look good or am I missing something very obvious?

I already came up with like 5 pages of lore, haha

Or maybe I should double down on artillery..

\# ++ Crusade Force Organization Chart ++ \[2988 Point(s), 2.5 Auxiliary Detachment(s)\]

\## Allegiance

Allegiance: Traitor

\## Army Configuration

Cohort Doctrine: Cohort Doctrine: Siege Pattern Cohort (Cohort Tactica: Ceaseless Bombardment)

Legiones Auxilia designation: Seleucid Thorakites

Reactions: Evade, Fire Support!, Fix Bayonets!, Form Ranks!, Reposition, Smokescreen

\# ++ Crusade Primary Detachment ++ \[1062 Point(s)\]

\## Command \[395 Point(s)\]

Armoured Command Section \[215 Point(s)\]: Turret Mounted demolisher cannon \[30 Point(s)\], Hull Mounted (Front) lascannon \[10 Point(s)\], Dozer blade \[5 Point(s)\], Flare Shield \[20 Point(s)\]

Artillery Command Section \[80 Point(s)\]:

Veletaris Command Section \[100 Point(s)\]: Frag grenades, Krak grenades

Prime Unit (Combat Veterans)

\## Troops \[342 Point(s)\]

Lasrifle Section \[111 Point(s)\]: Frag grenades, Krak grenades

Prime Unit (Logistical Benefit (LB - Armour))

Lasrifle Section \[111 Point(s)\]:

Lasrifle Section \[60 Point(s)\]:

Lasrifle Section \[60 Point(s)\]: Frag grenades, Krak grenades

\## Transport \[100 Point(s)\]

Aurox Transport \[50 Point(s)\]

Aurox Transport \[50 Point(s)\]

\## Armour \[225 Point(s)\]

Malcador Infernus Special Weapon Tank \[225 Point(s)\]: Centerline Mounted infernus cannon, Two sponson Mounted heavy flamer, Flare Shield \[20 Point(s)\]

• 1x Malcador Infernus \[205 Point(s)\]

\# ++ Auxiliary - Veletaris Tercio ++ \[401 Point(s), 1 Auxiliary Detachment(s)\]

\## Elites - Veletaris Storm or Veletaris Vanguard units only \[151 Point(s)\]

Veletaris Storm Section \[151 Point(s)\]: Frag grenades, Krak grenades

• 1x Veletarii Prime: Volkite charger

• 1x Veletarii \[13 Point(s)\]: Volkite charger, Vox interlock \[5 Point(s)\]

• 15x Veletarii \[8 Point(s)\]: Volkite charger

Prime Unit (Logistical Benefit (LB - Troops))

\## Heavy Transport \[200 Point(s)\]

Dracosan Armoured Transport \[200 Point(s)\]: Hull (Front) Mounted demolisher cannon \[35 Point(s)\], Dozer blade \[5 Point(s)\], Flare Shield \[20 Point(s)\]

• 1x Dracosan \[140 Point(s)\]

\## Troops \[50 Point(s)\]

Lasrifle Section \[50 Point(s)\]:

\# ++ Auxiliary - Armour Tercio ++ \[605 Point(s), 1 Auxiliary Detachment(s)\]

\## Armour - Leman Russ Strike, Leman Russ Assault or Malcador Heavy tank units only \[605 Point(s)\]

Leman Russ Assault Tank \[170 Point(s)\]: Turret Mounted demolisher cannon \[30 Point(s)\], Hull Mounted (Front) heavy flamer

Leman Russ Assault Tank \[170 Point(s)\]: Turret Mounted demolisher cannon \[30 Point(s)\], Hull Mounted (Front) heavy bolter

Malcador Heavy Tank \[265 Point(s)\]: Battlecannon, Demolisher cannon \[40 Point(s)\], Two sponson Mounted lascannon \[20 Point(s)\], Dozer blade \[5 Point(s)\], Flare Shield \[20 Point(s)\]

• 1x Malcador \[180 Point(s)\]

\# ++ Auxiliary - Artillery Tercio ++ \[400 Point(s), 0.5 Auxiliary Detachment(s)\]

\## Support - Rapier Section, Basilisk Artillery Tank or Medusa Artillery tank units only \[400 Point(s)\]

Basilisk Artillery Tank \[120 Point(s)\]: Centerline Mounted earthshaker cannon

• 1x Basilisk \[120 Point(s)\]

Medusa Artillery Tank \[140 Point(s)\]: Centerline Mounted medusa mortar

• 1x Medusa

Medusa Artillery Tank \[140 Point(s)\]: Centerline Mounted medusa mortar

• 1x Medusa

\# ++ Lord of War Detachment ++ \[520 Point(s)\]

\## Lord of War \[520 Point(s)\]

Shadowsword Super-heavy Tank Destroyer \[520 Point(s)\]: Volcano Cannon, Hull (Front) Mounted Twin heavy bolter, Searchlight \[5 Point(s)\]

• 1x Shadowsword \[475 Point(s)\]

Two Sponson Mounted lascannon and two Sponson Mounted twin heavy flamers \[40 Point(s)\] (2x Two Sponson Mounted Lascannon, 2x Two Sponson Mounted Twin heavy flamer)