Ode to forefathers.
A poem I composed while riding on the metro bored. (I doubt anybody reads it but at least it wouldn't die with my laptop). I heard that metre is rare in English poetry for some reason and decided to create an example if an English language poem with a clear metre. One verse lead to the next and here is what I ended up with.
Hail to you my nation.
Mighty you are and proud
We stand before you in ovation
Praising you clear and loud
We came from the riders of old
Who, blessed by divine thunder,
Relentlessly outwards rode
Seizing women and plunder.
They would claim the captured women
They would push their legs wide asunder
Empty wombs would be filled with semen
And new life would begin thereunder
Breasts would swell and bellies would grow
Sons and daughters would quicken inside
From dark nipples white milk would flow
For new warriors that would further ride
They took the lands yet unsown
And sowed white barley and wheat.
They hunted beasts yet unknown
And feasted on ale and meat.
As a toast to forefathers fallen
They poured wine on soil and peat
To turn maids into wives with breasts swollen
Sweet red honey they made into mead
In the hillforts in lands newly ploughed
In the steppes where stallions graze.
Epic songs would be chanted aloud
Sacred fires in hot hearths would blaze
On horseback they Dniester forded
By chariot they Oxus crossed.
Undying fame may to them be awarded
Who were in waters of history lost.
They wrought cities of wood and of stone.
West of Rome and east of Shiraz!
What was theirs is now our own.
Their blood flows proud in us.
From the Pontus we rode hither
From the steppes where thunder reigns
May we prosper while enemies wither
Like the sun; our might never wanes.
From the heavens watches Sky Father
May he bless us from Indus to Rhine.
Our land is our Goddess Mother
Our children shall have what was mine!
Posted Feb 26, 2026, 1:48 PM UTC