Do All Runners Go To Heaven? - Short Film - 13 Pages

TITLE: Do All Runners go to Heaven?

FORMAT: Short Film

LENGTH: 13 Pages

GENRE: Sports Dramedy

LOGLINE: Two rival runners, a bob-dylan-esque rambler and an entitled yuppie settle their feud at the Track 10, a running race with a $10,000 prize.

Not looking for any feedback on the Logline, as I intend on self producing this. Would love any feedback on the script, story, characters, etc!

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1h-1YAxtYVwTX6zx4hN5b--VNJHHReaqS/view?usp=drivesdk