The Joy in Sorrow

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A mourning walk — Raven’s breath, heir’s frozen tears.

Time halts, living loss, the loss that lives — the emptiness ever weeping.

Though quiet mercies tend:

Cloth to teary skin before salt tracks fall, cheeks bowed to sullen chin.

A Mother’s ear — a low soft voice settles the trembling heart.

A friend’s embrace, heartbeats near, breath entwines in chill.

Steam rising from a bowl, spicy scents, hands passing warmth on clanking plates.

Laughter, while tears are wiped, sudden and unstoppable — the room exhales, the ache forgot its place.

Paws ticking against the floor, wagging tongues and tails, comfort in fur & flesh.

Hope flickers —

a burdened light, dark thinner than before.

Sorrows burn now faint, edges fade —

lingers the heat from stone.

A morning walk — Father’s grief, air’s drying tears.

Living loss, the loss that lives…and lives…

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Posted Feb 26, 2026, 2:03 PM UTC

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