Speech crafting help

Hey so my group has an invitation to talk to our town to convince them to divest from US tech.

I'm tasked with drafting this speech (5 min) I wanted to ask for feedback from actual brains and not AI about if my TP are hitting, but I feel like I'm missing something.

Here goes:

My US tech concerns:

Palantir, AI fueled digital McCarthyism, (France has had palantir contract since 2013 - is France connect a trojan horse equivalent of what DOGE did? I'd actually like to ask Délégués about this)

anthropic trying to make the DOJ not use AI to decide lethal measures, and the DOJ is resisting that. Palestine as a training ground for lethal AI (more sources needed) Climate crisis concerns, and the displacement of human labor force

Why should Europe care? Complicity. Solidarity. Privacy. Not being a feudalistic territory to the US tech. Fighting the Nerd Reich is easier with divestment than sacrificing lives.