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Apartments

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Torn tarp.
Car parts.
Blue front.
Red rusted roof.

Melted trash bags.
Clear hot sun.
Dog dug holes.
The perfect stormy day.

Greenest grass turned blue.
Scarlet apple, front door.
Broken toys touched once.
All the wasteful live here.

The cop cars come shining.
Freezing pups, hungry to surrender.
All the dead live here.
The house of greed homes the poor.

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Posted Feb 28, 2026, 8:24 PM UTC

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