Once more with corrections: Seeking feedback on character creation

The UNTOLD Roleplaying Game System

Untold Possibilities. Untold is a story-first, universal roleplaying system designed to empower limitless adventures. The rules are setting- and genre-agnostic, meaning no matter what kind of game setting you prefer, the system makes it possible.

Mechanics that Fuel the Story. Untold utilizes a unique multi-d12 dice pool system built on a foundation of expertise and skill. You can add dice by spending Exertion, or reroll dice with far more limited Conviction. The potential for Snags and Boons means every action can result in dire complications or amazing opportunities. Untold is a system designed to make cinematic scenes a part of every session.

Untold Adventures. The Untold Core Rulebook contains everything you need to play: robust options for creating deep, multifaceted protagonists; a wide array of strengths, weaknesses, skills, and techniques; a streamlined yet tactical combat system; and unique free-form systems for Magic, Faith, and Psionic abilities. Layered throughout are the seeds for an infinite array of adventures. Your greatest stories await within—as yet, Untold.

“Untold Adventures. Untold Possibilities.”

Anyone interested in testing out the character creation process, let me know. Just wanted to see if the rules as written result in areas of confusion or mistakes. Here's the link to the character creation doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UCoCLt8B3sDlfqBZ9l-Oii8mU6VWodvKvqgXbTPvR88/edit?usp=sharing

Here's the character sheet, and Basics for context:

Basics: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MQkeZBKLgL3skma0-XsuJFZg5QuCI8lQBqahQYYN6xQ/edit?usp=sharing

Character sheet front: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1_GrYdqHRYTK4Cto61tG_isMq2S2iYwW8/view?usp=drive_link

Character sheet back: https://drive.google.com/file/d/17zHFiC5iVaUAfUNacIjhp9zCrt0pD3fV/view?usp=sharing