Competition track feedback

I am submitting a track for a competition, representing my high school. The theme is create a song that can be played at a fireworks show. I am looking for feedback on what I could improve. Any suggestions, comments, or concerns would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1EJF-3PWCL\_laTP2n9OTK0Ma2a8xpAjpr/view?usp=sharing