[Complete] [94k] [Progression Fantasy] The Ascendant

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Hello! I am looking for beta readers for my progression fantasy novel!

Here is my blurb:

Karnan, a prodigy, was meant to bring glory to his clan. Instead, he brought them shame when a lone distant star chose him as its champion.

He loses everything, his clan, his girl and his pride.

To win back his family's affection, Karnan would do anything-from befriending an ancient wolf to participating in a tournament of death.

But, being the weakest. What chances does he have?

Swaps: I am fine with reading anything under 100k and prefer to read and critique non-AI books like mine. So, please keep that in mind.

What am I looking for: Critiques on my plot, characters, and pacing.

Posted Mar 5, 2026, 7:51 PM UTC

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