[Complete] [94k] [Progression Fantasy] The Ascendant
Hello! I am looking for beta readers for my progression fantasy novel!
Here is my blurb:
Karnan, a prodigy, was meant to bring glory to his clan. Instead, he brought them shame when a lone distant star chose him as its champion.
He loses everything, his clan, his girl and his pride.
To win back his family's affection, Karnan would do anything-from befriending an ancient wolf to participating in a tournament of death.
But, being the weakest. What chances does he have?
Swaps: I am fine with reading anything under 100k and prefer to read and critique non-AI books like mine. So, please keep that in mind.
What am I looking for: Critiques on my plot, characters, and pacing.
Posted Mar 5, 2026, 7:51 PM UTC
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