Feedback Friday

Hi, all. This is our weekly Feedback Friday post, where you can receive constructive feedback on your story.

Comment with your story's title and genre and a 3 to 5 sentence summary. Be sure to include what specific aspects you want feedback on and how you'd like to receive it.

Important:

• This is not a self-promotion post. Do not post your cover or link to your story. You can share your link via DM directly to people who express interest in providing feedback.
• Do not ask for likes or votes. Comments, of course, are okay.
• Offer feedback to others. Give more than you take from this community.

Sample comment structure:

I'm seeking feedback for my cozy mystery Detective Something or Whatever.

It's about a detective who learns about a missing platypus and has to figure out what happened. The MC is a 32-year-old French man trying to balance romance and work. The tropes include femme fatale, incompetent police, and villainous victim. I'm not French so I'm mostly looking for feedback on the cultural aspects of the story and how authentic they feel.

I'd like feedback via comments on the first 3 chapters of the story.

Just a silly example, but you get the point.

Happy Friday!