(NSFW)Have been really into writing !SMUT! lately but have never written short stories or anything, so here is a snippet of what I just started, what do we think? Not sure if it's worth continuing on trying to write or not 🤔

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I wake to the sound of a door closing, my eyes h to focus, I need to rub them. Pulling on my arms I realize they are restrained. Rolling my head back and forth to try and clear my eyes and an extreme head rush I see the figure of a man? Tall and appears to be wearing a tie. "Well hello there sunshine, glad yo see that you are waking up" a man's voice for sure. Thats when it all comes rushing back. I have been drugged.... well willingly drugged, kidnapped, tied down, and soon violently pleasured! The longer I am awake the more things that come into focus and that I notice. I realize I am completely naked, chained down by both my arms and legs, there is a plethora of toys hung neatly on the wall to my left, and the man is standing at the end of the table looking at me with a nurturing softness. He looks to be about 6'4, very muscular, and slightly tan.

                "Are you feeling okay?"
   His voice brings my thoughts to an abrupt stop. His voice is deep and soft, he is wearing dark Grey slacks, a navy button up woth the top 3 buttons undone, and a very loose tie. My eyes have focused enough to make out a gold watch on his left wrist, and a black spiked ring in his right eyebrow just above vibrant blue eyes. He is just staring at me, why is he just staring at me?? He should be exploring my body with his, that is what I payed for. 
      "Are you feeling okay?"..... Right He asked me a question thats why he is just staring. I nod.
     "Good." His voice changed, it got deeper, more rough sounding.


     He moves his hand up my body, finger tips barely making contact with my skin. Starting from the top of my left foot, up the front of my leg, narrowly missing my clit as he begins to weave his touch across my body. There is an immense heat, and throbbing sensation between my legs. LIght touches approach my chest, my nipples harden in anticipation of being brushed. But he avoids (what a tease) and moves up in-between my breasts instead. When he reaches my shoulders he begins tracing my collarbone gently, he leans down slowly until his lips are hovering just over mine, so close his bottom lip slightly touches mine. I am no longer just throbbing, I am wet, my breathing heavy, my body is begging for a more solid touch. His mouth slides over to my ear, his hand moves up to wrap around my throat... He squeezes, my bark arches slightly, a moan escapes my mouth.
      "Don't forget your safe word is RAVEN." he whispers before standing and ripping his belt from its loops. My eyes widen with anticipation and excitement.

Posted Mar 6, 2026, 8:48 PM UTC

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