Princess of Heaven

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Here’s a fic I made on AO3, it’s a little based on Hazbin Hotel

(An angel is walking around Hell alone)

Pomni: (whimpers)

(It was a very cold night, Pomni curls in an alley and sleeps; Suddenly, a shadow appears and he puts his coat on Pomni, he carries Pomni and takes her with him. Pomni wakes up in a large warm bed)

Pomni: Where am I?

(She hears someone talking)

Voice I found her in an alley, she must be so scared and confused

(Pomni peaks out of the room and sees the Prince of Hell talking with a few servants, he was so handsome and was dressed in crimson and black; Pomni immediately hides under the covers, Jax comes in and sits besides Pomni)

Jax: Don’t be scared, I won’t hurt you (removes the covers) What’s your name?

Pomni: P….Pomni

Jax: Such a lovely name, I’m the one and only Prince Jax

Servant: (comes in) Your highness, your father as arrived

Jax: Come, Pomni, let’s go see him

(Jax takes Pomni to the throne room where The King of Hell is, he was making rubber ducks)

Jax: Dad, this is Pomni

Pomni: (curtsies shyly) Your majesty

Dax: Why hello, little dear, I’m Dax

(Pomni was looking at her feet all shy)

Dax: It’s okay, sweetie, are you hungry? Dinner will be ready soon

Pomni: (nods)

(Later, they all have dinner, it was Pomni’s favorite: salmon and rice)

Dax: Now, Pomni, how did you end up here?

Pomni: Well……I was practicing my singing earlier when I heard some angels taking about killing sinners, they do it every year

Dax: It’s called the Extermination, it happens when Hell gets too populated

Pomni: I heard so much violence and many lives lost in, it made me cry and I flew away as fast as I could but I bumped into something and then I was falling. (Starting to tear up) I didn’t like hearing all of that stuff, the sinners didn’t deserve it (cries)

Jax: (to Dax) Those Exorcists must’ve traumatized her!

Dax: (hugs Pomni) Shh, shh, shh, it’ll be alright

Jax: (notices crosses on Pomni’s cheeks) What are those?

Dax: Those marks mean she’s a princess

Jax: Pomni, you’re a princess?

Pomni: Yes, I’m the Princess of Heaven (yawns) I could go back home, but my wings aren’t working properly from the fall

Dax: Jax, can you take her to bed?

Jax: Sure, dad

(Jax gives Pomni a nightgown for her to wear and takes her to bed)

Dax: Jax, why don’t we show Pomni around tomorrow?

Jax: That’ll be nice day, she’s very shy

(The next day, Jax and Dax show Pomni around Hell and the good things about it; They take her to the Wrath Ring)

Dax: This is the Wrath Ring, it’s home to many demons

Jax: Despite the name of the ring, they’re all very nice

(Some demon children see Pomni and they go her with fascination and curiosity, they ask her lots of questions)

Demon Child #1: Are you an angel?

Demon Child #2: Is it true you have gold blood?

Demon Child #3: What’s it like in Heaven?

(Pomni smiles and she plays with the kids; She takes out her bubble wand and blows many golden bubbles. The demon kids pop the bubbles happily; Next, they go to the Lust Ring

Jax: The Lust Ring can be pretty……..overwhelming

(Pomni saw lots of things and she starts to get overwhelmed; A mix and match demon goes to Pomni, their name is Gooble)

Gooble: You good?

Pomni: Yes, I’ve never seen stuff like this before (looks up at Gooble) Woah, you’re beautiful

Gooble: Thanks, I’m Gooble

Pomni: I’m Pomni, is it always like this on the Lust Ring?

Gooble: Yeah, but there are plenty of fun stuff too, come with me

(Gooble takes them to a karaoke bar)

Gooble: This is where all the demons of Lust perform

Pomni: Wow

(They go to Gooble’s twin, Zooble, the bartender of the bar)

Gooble: The usual, Zoobs

(Zooble gives Gooble a drink and cigarette)

Zooble: (gives Pomni some holy water) On the house

Pomni: Thanks, I didn’t know there was holy water in Hell

Dax: It’s mostly imported from Heaven

Jax: Pomni, wanna sing?

Pomni: I only sing for my mom, I get stage fright when I sing for others

Dax: It’s okay, sweetie, we won’t judge

(Pomni gets on stage and takes a deep breath, she sings. It was the most beautiful voice. When Pomni was done, everyone claps)

Jax: That was amazing, Pomni!

Pomni: Thanks

(Next, they go to the Envy Ring)

Dax: This is the Envy Ring, everyone is jealous of each other

(Some demons look at Pomni with jealous)

Pomni: (holds onto Jax)

Jax: It’s okay, Pomni, don’t pay attention to them

Dax: Envy has lots of gardens with many fruits and vegetables

(Pomni sees lots of big juicy red tomatoes )

Pomni: Woah……

(Dax buys the tomatoes for Pomni)

Dax: (gives the tomatoes to Pomni) Here you go, sweetie

(Pomni squeals happily m; Next, they go to the Greed Ring)

Jax: This is the Greed Ring, It has the most shops in Hell

(They go to a shop and look at all the stuff)

Pomni: These are amazing

(Next, they go to the Gluttony Ring)

Dax: The Gluttony Ring has all sorts of food

(Pomni is amazed by all the shapes and smells, her stomach growls)

Pomni: Sorry, I have this large appetite

Dax: It’s fine, sweetie

(Pomni eats the tomatoes but shares some with Jax and Dax; Pomni sees an elderly demon sitting alone, she didn’t have enough money for food)

Pomni: (gives some tomatoes to the elderly demon) Here you go, ma’am

Elderly Demon: Why, thank you, dear, you’re such a sweet young lady

(Pomni smiles; Next is the Sloth Ring)

Dax: This is the Sloth Ring, demons relax here

Pomni: (yawns) All this exploring is making me tired

Dax: (picks up Pomni) Let’s get you back to the palace, dear

(They go back to the Pride Ring and Dax puts Pomni to bed)

Dax: Did you have a good time, Pomni?

Pomni: Yes, Hell wasn’t what the other angels said, everything was so……..peaceful

Dax: We Hell residents are misunderstood, don’t let those awful things get to your head

Pomni: Yes, Dax (yawns)

(Pomni falls asleep and Jax and Dax go to bed; Later that night, they was a bright yellow and green glow)

Pomni: (gasps) She’s here!

(Pomni rushes outside; Jax and Dax come out too)

Jax: Pomni, what is it?

(They see a beautiful being, it was Pomni’s mom)

Jax: Who is that?

Pomni: God

Punelope: (shakes Dax’s hand)

Dax: She’s such a wonderful girl, your holiness, those awful exorcists said terrible things that scared her

Punelope: (punishes the exorcists; heals Pomni’s wings and puts her crown on her head)

Pomni: Mom, Hell as wonderful as Heaven! There shouldn’t be any exterminations

Punelope: (smiles and nods; gives Jax and Dax blessings for taking care of Pomni)

Jax: Thank you, your holiness

Punelope: (points to the sky)

Pomni: I have to go now, thanks for everything (hugs Jax and Dax)

(Pomni and Punelope fly back to Heaven; The Exterminations are officially history and the residents in Hell got to continue to live very happy lives)

Posted Mar 8, 2026, 5:55 PM UTC

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