I published my book for the first time today the child will be very happy who used to create storys in summer break

A very thanks to webnovel helped me publish my writing so i love make storys but i thought you have to publish a physical book to bring it to public i recently started reading webnovel my first novel was reverend insanity, after which i came ro know we can publish owr story on the Internet so i did it plz review it and tell me what i did wrong in my first time writing

Seniors i will remember ypur kindness