Feedback on the beginning of a children's chapter book

https://preview.redd.it/hjfyjhy5d7og1.png?width=1094&format=png&auto=webp&s=9e1322e2f066d02f31db0f68d86fb56f2a4c2016

this is just an opening for a chapter book for ages 6-8, tell me what you think. ( illustrations will be a big part of the story of course)