I weave my love

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I weave a cloth with endless knots

with my mind full of deep thoughts

I weave a cloth with vibrant colours

my hands unfazed by heavy sores

I weave a cloth with wool so soft

the cashmere with love in its warmth

I weave a cloth with delicate embroidery

reminiscing our delightful memory

I weave a cloth under the shadow of a tree

that is calm as her presence with me

I weave a cloth with her name inscribed

For her love had my heart bribed.

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Posted Mar 13, 2026, 6:16 AM UTC

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