please give advice for my poem

Descending from the heavens

an angel settles down from the stairs of hope

passionately gazing upon mankind

reaching the hand of desperation into the earth

fingertips touching a tainted sea,

ears peering into a dismal tune,

eyes gazing upon mankind-

stepping foot onto the soil

dirty soil that was once brimmed with life

now rotting away in a poisoned land

filled with horror, a spark died-

as light cometh, it soon fades

no belif can be restored to that which is ignorant