Mantren

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Behind closed eyes

Feel the form shift in shape

When you project these transitional lies

in defence and defiance

In heart, in soul, but mind-

I’ve accepted this presence

An allowance to risk

A welcoming of potential destruction

A selfish question, impossible desire

Death of form, death of self

The door is what you imagine it to be

Open and afraid, closed and honest alike

Burn in this process

Burn in the ego

Burn in the becoming of self

A constant companion

Ideology of self-preservation

Omnipotent, omnipresent

A pattern of mind

A future heaven made of present hell

The transition will not free you

A futile path to end of self

Fulfillment is beyond reach

Short term pleasure for which you must and will settle

Becoming the ideal, attaining the desired

Becoming the curse, rid of the purity

Burn in this process

Burn in the ego

Burn in the becoming of self

Burn in self-indulgent benevolence

Burn in this endeavour

Burn until it is done

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First time sharing any kind of my own poetry, I’m interested to hear if or how anyone relates to this and what it says to them on a personal level.

Feedback links:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/NXuu8BwBA0

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/A2zviJQ3FB

Posted Mar 14, 2026, 12:28 AM UTC

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