What do you guys think of this? (big thanks to anyone who would provide time to listen)

Hi!!!! I hope you are well. So I'm writing this song: https://voca.ro/183DPh7mIsKO. It's experimental pop which surprised because I never thought I'd make pop music.

I started it last March 1st but I'm busy with work like everyone else so the progress is frustratingly slow but a fun process. It actually evolved before this but after weeks of deliberating, I had to redo it and finally came up with I think is something that suits the song.

I have recorded seperate parts and I am now brainstorming how to put them altogether. The second part in this clip will probably be put as a bridge or some outro after same catharsis I hope I could pull off.

What do you guys think of this?