Cozy fog

Steamy thoughts

Float through this cozy fog

Of wet dreams

As the warm water falls

Onto my marble-like skin

If this is a sin

Then I am a sinner

But also the winner

Who takes it all

As I take you deep

Face against the wall

Soaking you up like a sponge

Every drop of you

Before it evaporates

Before it becomes

Reality

Lifting this cozy fog

Of wet dreams

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