Love At The Wrong Time.

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been a while since I posted, this was written in response to a different piece of writing that was sent to me by the subject of this.

You've called me a challenge,

You've allowed me to rise to it,

Not something to beat,

not something to play,

On and on, you'd go

On and on you'd stay,

You call for change,

You call for peace,

I call me a coward

I call me a cheat.

But...

Yet we remain

Yet we play

Here i challenge

Here you stay

Love,

Hate,

Right or wrong

Silly fundamentals

For keeping hearts at bay

Send me to the gallows,

or

Send me to your bed.

I get to be the heart,

Whilst you remain the Head

So circuit wire each vein

Straight From my chest,

Straight To your brain.

You need me yours?

When I need you mine?

So we wait for this to be over,

But over isn't the perfect life.

An epic written

On the edge of a knife,

Wrote In betrayal

Its never seemed darker,

But we come alive at night

So this is where we belong

Not as a permanent, but as a flag,

Planted inside of both of us.

And that much is true,

When it comes to me

It all means you.

Because you're my light inside this dark,

You're the pain inside my heart,

Where you dream of peace,

I dream of sparks.

So It goes like this

once upon a time,

A love story hid,

Its just waiting to start.

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/wxYU95zwrp

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/KCfB3OS7l8

Posted Apr 1, 2026, 10:19 PM UTC

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