[2,086] My first foray into completing a novel, working title; Twisting Away.

This is not the full first chapter but close enough I suppose. I’ve had a couple people look it over but while I haven’t gotten negative feedback it hasn’t been overwhelmingly positive either. Should I scrap it, heavily edit, or keep it going? Blunt honesty desperately needed.

For context it’s a MM romance about twins being swept away into a new world via a witch, the whole first chapter is just story building and prior to the ‘sweeping’. Also to clarify, they each find love after as well.

**Content warnings would be mention of alcohol and cursing.

It’s a Google doc with viewer permissions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/153eKxpFwu5EF0yFDy65-XnV3hd45EddusBF0hDpGSxA/edit?usp=drivesdk