What were we?

Feedback Please

Was I an oyster on your shore?

You picked me up and opened my shell

You saw the hidden pearl within

Surviving through the storms of sand

Was I a book on your shelf?

Freshly printed, unopened

Your fingers gently skimmed through my pages

While your arms held my binding close

Was I a curse upon your soul?

Were my words too dark for your heart to hold?

Did they cast a shadow over your eyes,

Keeping you from spelling my lines?

I hope I was a soft summer breeze

Whispering in a tongue unknown

The sun gently kissing your skin

The feeling of a warm hug you'll always hold

Links:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/UnCIgBQA1B

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/8veH476xrY

Posted Apr 2, 2026, 10:01 AM UTC

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