Anyone here want to check out the first five pages of my short film?

Title: Still

Format: Short

Pages: 2-6 of 13

Genre: Drama/ Psychological horror.

Logline:

A man haunted by a missed call is forced to relive the moment he chose not to answer.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1o6yG2XiJOTIwf4wnIXBW4eK3hkhGlOxt/view?usp=sharing

Does the opening draw you in? What are your thoughts on the writing and the demon scene? Would you keep reading after the dissolve?

Thanks for checking it out.