Keep your head up

Feedback Please

“Keep your head up!” They said

Never understood why

The shoelaces i step on

How do i know

The gum on the floor

I just missed

The song on my playlist

I want to skip

Hollywood Walk of fame?

Never been there

What if the floor’s more important?

Whats good in keeping my head up?

The tears fall out eventually.

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Posted Apr 4, 2026, 1:21 PM UTC

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