blurb feedback - isekai LITRPG

Hi, im a new writer to royal road, launching in a few weeks. I'm writing a litrpg isekai. would appreciate feedback on my blurb? thank you! Oh and its called The Doomsday Reaver.

Bloodied. Broken. Five hit points. Oh, and there's a sabretooth tiger about to decorate the jungle floor with his guts. Great. Isekai'd to the dawn of humanity, Felix awakes in the savage lands. No tutorial, the system hasn't even been updated in centuries.

But when Felix is given one chance to go home – he burns it. This place might have wolves, sabretooth tigers and 20-foot war-mech griefers from the future, but at least there are stats. There are rules, and Felix knows just how to exploit both.

Because these are the Doomsday Trials. The apocalyptic system built for one purpose – to forge the perfect warrior To fight through every age of humanity. Stone. Bronze. Iron. Beyond.

Right now? Don't die. Next? Felix needs a working HUD. Maybe some pants. Might as well take both from the nearest corpse. ID tag Reaver. Not bad.