[Complete] [65k] [Political thriller] October surprise
Hi, fellow writers and readers! I'm looking for beta readers for my novel, October Surprise! What if law and Order and House of cards or The West wing had a baby? October Surprise is A political thriller with elements of suspense and drama. The story delves into themes of power, family, and identity, centering on the kidnapping of the president's son during a close reelection campaign.
The narrative alternates between perspectives, including:
• The president grappling with personal and political turmoil,
• A lead investigator racing against time,
• The kidnapped son enduring captivity,
• The first family struggling with the emotional toll of the crisis.
I've been working on this story since 2021, I've received great feedback, and l've written another version. I'm eager to hear more to see how the story resonates before moving toward publishing. Your feedback will help shape the final draft! I'll provide a list of specific questions to guide your reading experience and ensure your input is impactful. A timeline and deadline will also be shared. If this sounds like something you'd enjoy, please let me know! I'm happy to trade, and I'll provide a link to the first chapters so you can see if it's your taste. Thank you for considering being part of this journey! I can DM you a chapter if you want to give it a try. Thanks in advance!!!!
Posted Apr 5, 2026, 2:46 AM UTC