Feedback on the Story so Far?

So far, I had wrote the prologue and Chapters 1, 2, 3 of my story. For those of you who don't know, this is an AU where I do my take on the Forman War, with new countries that I made up (such as Harmonia, Zaurak, Taurus, Hetzel and Lynx) added to it. I have been writing these stories (including the remastered ones) ever since the original prologue three months ago. There are many more stories to come from now. If you had read these chapters, then tell me what you would like to hear your thoughts on each of them (I am not intending to beg for attention, I just wanted to hear your thoughts and feedback on each of the chapters (in which I put the links for them in the description) so far in my story).

And if you are asking about if I would make the images for the chapters, then the answer would yes. In fact, I am thinking about making one, two or even three images for the remastered Chapter 2 (in fact, I already am making one image in the process).

Links to the Stories:

• Prologue - https://www.reddit.com/r/Centaura_Roblox/comments/1r31w5i/prologue_the_sic_incident_remastered/
• Chapter 1 - https://www.reddit.com/r/Centaura_Roblox/comments/1rpsnv3/chapter_1_preparations_for_war_remastered/
• Chapter 2 - https://www.reddit.com/r/Centaura_Roblox/comments/1sckso3/chapter_2_to_zaurak_we_will_go_remastered_and/
• Chapter 3 - https://www.reddit.com/r/Centaura_Roblox/comments/1ri5gbw/chapter_3_the_ants_are_here_part_1/ (for Part 1) & https://www.reddit.com/r/Centaura_Roblox/comments/1rkuyn4/chapter_3_the_ants_are_here_part_2/ (for Part 2)