New Level I'm Working on- need advice

So, I'm kind of new to geometry dash- I've been 'learning' I guess- and this is the level I'm working on, I don't have a name for it yet, but this is just a work-in-progress level I made. I wanted to build on the narrative that the pillars of moving grid blocks are trying to help- and hurt you.

(sorry the volume is kinda low)

I guess I'm looking for advice- and what should I name it? the song is Apocalypse Doors on NewGrounds (The song ID is 10001002)