New Etsy shop, still 0 views

Shop Critique

Hi everyone,

I opened my first Etsy shop 5 days ago selling premium hardcover aesthetic journals, and I’d really appreciate some honest feedback.

At the moment I have 13 active listings, 0 sales, and literally 0 views, so I’m trying to figure out what I should improve before I keep scaling.

I’d especially love feedback on:

- thumbnails / first images

- whether the titles feel searchable

- if the price makes sense for a hardcover POD journal

- whether the niche feels appealing enough

- anything that would stop you from clicking

Shop: matchamooncake.etsy.com

Please be brutally honest!! I genuinely want to improve and learn.

Posted Apr 6, 2026, 1:22 PM UTC

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