lucid dreams

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I lucid dream just to see you again

where I can hold you close to me.

I dream of a cherry tree over us.

Your smile resting against mine...

your hair entwined with mine.

Time stretches while we cuddle.

And we stay there in silence

because this is the only place—

you're alive.

Feedback 1:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/YjC3K7BHQ1

Feedback 2:

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/46cqY8QnQD

Posted Apr 6, 2026, 1:23 PM UTC

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